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Craig's avatar

"Write what you know," they say.

I hope this isn't autobiographical.

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Kristin McTiernan's avatar

“I have a body count. No, the other kind”

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Kevin Babcock's avatar

hahahahahahahahaha, oh my god

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Keith Hayden's avatar

Very strong intro! The voice is authentically clear. Direction of the story really hooks.

Great job Kristin!

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Kristin McTiernan's avatar

Thank you!

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DW Davis's avatar

He thought he'd treed a pussycat. Instead, a mama lion came out from behind the tree.

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